Yet Again With A Little Extra Help (Naruto/Hinata)

Yet Again With A Little Extra Help by Third Fang
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5218118/1/Yet-again-with-a-little-extra-help

I love this story, love it, love it. Okay now that is out of my system this is an Awesome story. I thought I had already posted this one. I love the 5 OCs and wish they were mine. {The people in the banner are who I think would be perfect for that character.} The author gives a character sheet for each in his profile and wouldn't it be nice if others did the same. I think of all of them Ghost is my favorite, he is the tortured hero, kick-ass fighter, fundamentally insane, sarcastic, funny, loving, psychotically obsessed with exploding cows and I love him. This is a time travel story with a difference. The Naruto world is losing the fight and in the opening chapter Naruto is trapped as the fox is being extracted. Suddenly in the mind-space there is a tear and a drunk off his rocker Ghost shows up. Naruto is unsure what to do with this crazy character but when offered the chance to redo the past and save the ones he loves he agrees to Ghost's terms. His friends may never forgive him for what he unleashed and they will have trauma about exploding cows for the rest of their lives but they will become stronger and in the process become the best of the best for their village and the ninja world. Also do not read this at work for fear of cackling madly at the stunts pulled, your coworkers will not understand.

New Chance (Naruto/Hinata)

New Chance by Hektols
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4043196/1/New-chance

I am glad I found this story again. It is a time travel with a difference. In the future Madara brings Minato back with the Kuchiyose: Edo Tensei to use against an adult Naruto. What Madara was not aware of that after his bringing back of the prior Hokages, Minato had developed an untested seal to prevent any of the others coming back and being put under control. While it did not stop them being brought back it did prevent mind control and Minato immediately joined his son. Later in a fight with Madara a jujitsu goes wrong and Minato finds himself in the past with a chance to meet his 10 year old son, later in the story you find out he was not the only one that was caught in the timeslip. The story is funny, serious, funny, poignant and did I mention funny. And if the story was not enough the omakes are guaranteed to make you cackle madly. Minato decides to train Nauto as well as friends and punish the villagers. It does not take long for the villagers to realize that Naruto's father is back and boy is he pissed.

A Different Scroll (Naruto/Hinata)

A Different Scroll by BlueWolf1923
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9598944/1/A-Different-Scroll

A great story with awesome, awesome fight scenes. The first chapter was okay but was not something that caught my imagination except for Hinatas' "Forbidden Taijutsu; Single Strike of Eternal Pain" which cracked me up; however, I always try at least 5 chapters before I dismiss a story and I am glad that I did because it picked up fast. The writing stabilized and the characters became more 3 dimensional. I love the development of Hinata and Naruto. He gives her the confidence to believe in herself and she becomes a steady influence on him but they retain their core characters. The changes that can happen from one event is the basis of must stories and the author uses the fact that Hinata decides to help Naruto with a scroll on the Clone Technique and the friendship blossoms. They continue to train together and with Hinata's help they begin to develop their own techniques.The fight scenes are amazing, the author manages to make every fight different but still believable and no one is super powered and an expert on everything. As the story progresses their fights become more complicated and more destructive. I like the fact that they lose as often as they win in the beginning but they never stop and begin to bring in other people. Gaara and his relationship with Tenten is funny as well as poignant since he has no idea what is happening since no one has ever wanted to be with him. The conversations with Kurama are some of the best characterization of the fox that I have read. The author does not turn the fox into a wimp, a mother, a seductress, or pet. Instead, he is angry with solid reasons for his anger, he is not mindless destruction, he is cunning but he is not evil, when Naruto unlocks the Rinnegan Kurama believes that he might be the one to help the Tailed Demons. The story is long at over 300,000 and is just beginning the arc after the timeskip. I cannot wait to see what happens next.